Erin

 Dear Mr. Aronson,  As you know, we have been reading your book in class these past few weeks. It is not the type of subject matter I would normally choose to read on my own, so I must admit I did not especially enjoy the book. This is not to say that I did not think that it was well-written. I applaud you for taking on such a controversial topic but the book left me with a few unanswered questions.  First, why did you include your very prejudiced views and hatred toward the Germans (page 208)? If the purpose of your book is to persuade readers not to be prejudiced, why include such negative thoughts, no matter how understandable they are? Although I appreciated your honesty, I was surprised at how strong your language was.  Second, is your book really intended for young adult readers? If so, why did you assume that “everyone knows” about certain civil rights topics (pages 232 and 241)? I thought it would be best to explain more, to be sure that your young readers completely understand your examples.  Third, I thought that your book ended rather abruptly. Although I know it is supposed to be a conclusion, the final chapter is one of your shortest and seemed like you were just trying to finish the book. I thought that the ending lacked enough constructive suggestions about things people could do to prevent their own prejudices.  Thank you for taking the time to visit our school, read our letters, and discuss your book with us.  Sincerely,  Erin Berl  